Week 10 Story: Raven Meets the Young Boy
Raven Meet the Young Boy
One day, after Raven had shaped many animals out of the clay
and made hills and trees for the earth plain, he chose to take a rest. He
walked slowly along the shore near Man’s home and came upon Man’s young son playing
in the grass outside the house. The young boy skipped and spun around playing
by himself. Raven watched as the young boy picked up a stick from brandished it
at the air, mimicking the hunters like his father. And Raven smiled at the boy.
On and on the boy played an Raven delighted in watching his
games. Raven decided he would make the boy laugh. As Raven approached, the young
boy was startled from his imaginary game. In fear he shrunk away from Raven’s
massive black form.
Raven was surprised at the boy’s fear. He raised his beak,
like a mask, and shed his Raven form so that we would look like the boy and his
father. Then the boy was no afraid. But he did not smile. Raven wanted to make
the boy laugh and he did not want his Raven form to scare the boy.
He reached down and collected a lump of clay. He fashioned
something that looked like himself in Raven form. He held it out to the boy,
but the young one would not take it. He was afraid. So Raven took the clay back
and began to change it.
He made it shorted and fatter. Then he webbed it’s toes and
made them grow. He made the beak large and wide and grasped a bright orange
flower to add the garish color. Then with a flourish, he drew back feathers
from the top of its head and elongated them like a great silly hat. Finally, he
put drops of water on the animal’s body but let the face dry until it was white
like the great white bear.
When at last this new animal was finished, Raven laid the
puffin at the boy feet. The young boy immediately smiled at the animal. The
puffin waddled to the water at the shore and began to swim. Raven and the young
boy delighted at the small, funny, new animal. And the puffin always lived
along the shore, eating under water, but coming on to land to be seen with his
bright orange beak.
The Tufted Puffin. Source |
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
I really enjoyed the stories of how the Raven made the animals. I enjoyed most that he seemed to have an innocent, curious demeanor with his creations. Like he was learning as he went. Unlike a lot of other mythologies, especially western religions, the Raven did not seem to judge man's ways. if he felt that man was hunting too much or getting to cocky, he just made a Grizzly to remind man of the pecking order. I liked that.
This story does not reflect one particular story from the collection of Raven's myths. I wanted to make a additional story. And come on...we've all wondered about how some of the animals on the earth came to look like they do. The blue footed booby?? Babboons?? This tufted puffin is indigenous to Alaska and I thought it would be fun to explore why he looks like he does.
Source: Myths and Legends of Alaska, edited by Katharine Berry Judson (1911).
Hey Samantha!
ReplyDeleteThis story was clever and you did a great job telling it. The character of Raven was so interesting. He seemed creative and thoughtful. I appreciated how hard Raven worked to get the child to smile! It all made for a really unique, lighthearted origin story for the Puffin. I had never heard a Raven myth like this, so your author's note was helpful. Have you considered writing more Raven stories? Great job!
Hello Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this story! It's almost like you have a certain affinity for writing stories about birds. I have always been fond of the puffin bird so reading this sort of origin story was very entertaining. I loved the way you conveyed your message and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story!
Hi Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI loved your storytelling style! I did wonder what sort of creature Raven was in the story, and how he had the power to create life from clay figures. I liked that the Raven wanted to befriend the young boy and made a silly looking creature to make the boy smile. I'm going to assume for now, that Raven is the bird, but is the size of the boy and that's why the boy was afraid of him.
Hi Samantha! I enjoyed reading your story. This was such a fun way to explain the creation of the puffin. Your writing is very clear and descriptive. I would have loved to have read some dialogue to get a better idea of what the little boy or the birds sounded like. I’m also interested to know what kind of creatures Raven created in the original stories. Good job overall!
ReplyDeleteHi Samantha!
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading about the creation of the puffin and the story behind it! I thought your style of storytelling was very creative, and it brought a lot to the story. I would be interested to hear this story from a different point of view, perhaps complete with narration or dialogue from the characters. I can't wait to read more of your stories!